» Comics - Ch 2 - 6 - 13 Aug 2006 08:20 pm
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Cerise, 13 Aug 2006 05:17 pm
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KLANG!
Okay, first off, I don't like this page. I've had problems with it for the past two weeks, so I just kind of gave up. Also, this is the very first fight scene I've ever drawn! Yay! So please bear with me while I attempt to work my way through this.
Originally the page had a glorious amount of hand drawn speedlines that looked lovely in pencil, and not so great in pen. So I had to edit it out and use pre-made speedlines. Yuck.
If you guessed that the pose in the last panel was difficult to draw, you were right. Jay's position is awkward, and I wanted to change it, but I decided I've been working on the page too long.
So Jay's come to steal the sword. You all knew it was comming, right? Right?
Muchos thanks to Daidaishar of Hurrocks Fardel for remodelling my site!
I got in a fight one time with a really big guy, and he said, "I'm going to mop the floor with your face." I said, "You'll be sorry." He said, "Oh, yeah? Why?" I said, "Well, you won't be able to get into the corners very well."
~ Emo Phillips
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daidaishar, 13 Aug 2006 09:11 pm
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phwa, you're being too hard on yourself. I for one think it's good, and usualy I'm picky about fight scenes. I like Liam's pose in the last pannel, and really, jay's looks fine. I also like how you added the color into Liam's hair in the seccond pannel.
I found The Princess Bride in a bookstore todaye, so, as luck would have it, the last thing I read before this page was "I'm not left handed." *sigh* I'm gonna miss fencing ya Cerise.
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Cerise, 16 Aug 2006 04:14 pm
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well, I am secretly proud of the last panel. I did a rough of liam's pose on a different sheet of paper, but it took me forever to try and reproduce it on the page. Eventually, I just traced it. 0_o;
I loved that book! And the movie! And how we'd always qoute it during fencing class. *sniff* I'll miss trying to kill you as well, Dai. ;_;
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daidaishar, 16 Aug 2006 11:44 pm
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never forget that one time you almost did T_T we shall have to fisht once more when i return.
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doom Bubbles, 21 Aug 2006 04:08 am
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awsome art ^__^
faverised
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blueflower03 (Guest), 21 Aug 2006 04:51 am
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OMG. I love how this page turned out. LOOOOOVE
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