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Cerise, December 28th, 2005, 7:13 pm

"It does not do to leave a live dragon out of your calculations, if you live near him."
~ J. R. R. Tolkien

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Squinky, December 31st, 2005, 4:51 pm

I think you draw well. But the Dragon could have been done better, minues the photshop filters, they just ruin it for me.

Cerise, January 2nd, 2006, 2:14 pm

Iknow... >_< I can't draw dragons. See my first news post about this.

Jydra, January 12th, 2006, 12:23 am


I LOVE the suddenness of this page!

The way it comes out and whacks you is really priceless!

Jydra, January 12th, 2006, 12:25 am

DOn't fret about the dragond. It's not bad, it's just un practised.

What I would do if I were getting ready to draw a dragon, is find the animals closest to what I want my dragons to look like, then study them as I draw it. That way you have some basis of refference.

For example, the creature designer for Record of Lodoss War studied crocodiles and alligators and based his dragons on those animals.

F_Starr, February 20th, 2006, 10:02 pm

WAHAHAHA!!! I LOVE IT, this is great!

The Dark One (Guest), September 3rd, 2006, 2:15 pm

Your Craft
I am very disappointed in the quality of your work. You use very little line, in particular cross-hatching, to create depth. Furthermore, I can see your lack of experience in developing a well constructed composition. Everything looks very immature for a student in college. Furthermore, your proportions and use of anatomy are very uneducated. I would recommend you take a life drawing class (or 2, 3 or even 4...etc.). However, I would recommend that you not try and trace this has gotten people in trouble before. Trust me when I say this.

Regardless, your effort is noble. So, keep on trying. I say this because I haven't seen a good Fantasy Comic Book in years.

Finally, I really like the fact that you have made an effort to touch an audience that has a lot of potential and money (but your work must reflect quality).

The Dark One...

daidaishar, September 11th, 2006, 8:51 pm

For the reccord, Cerise isn't in college yet, so she's got time to improve, and improve she has already.

princessaranel, November 16th, 2006, 12:05 am

Maybe you're not...
about to be eaten. Maybe it's a all in your mind. You have very vivid dreams.

Seriously though, I love a dramatic beginning. And unless this character's life is really short and the story is about the dragon, I can't wait to see how he gets himself out of this situation!

Silvertip, January 4th, 2007, 7:12 pm

Oh that's hilarious! I love things like that!

belovedrain, May 6th, 2007, 1:48 am

Hmmm, well that does mess up his theory a TEENSY bit, heheh

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